Monday, March 21, 2016

America Is Fat

Currently there is a large problem in America, and that problem is obesity. America is the number one country for obesity across all ages, that’s nothing to be proud of. 33% of American adults are obese in America, that is mortifying to realise that 1 in 3 American adults are obese. (National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey, 2010.) With all of these stats it’s no wonder why America is #1 fattest nation. America needs to change their dietary and exercise habits if they want to no longer be known as the fattest nation on earth. Points that will be made include the effects McDonalds and other fast food companies are making on this obesity crisis, and secondly the right to feel comfortable in your own body while being obese.

Firstly, McDonald’s, is one of the biggest fast food chains in the world and a leading cause in why Americans are so fat. Don’t get me wrong McDonald’s brand have done a good track record of doing nice charitable things which things include charity fund named Ronald McDonald house for troubled families to focus on your kids wellbeing. The brand uses sneaky underhand sale techniques to sell their products this includes supporting big athletic events such as the Olympics, McDonald’s also have a few charity trusts. They make out to be such a good company to build a relationship with you, the customer so when you eat their food you believe it’s the right thing to do. McDonald’s use psychiatric techniques to induce their products as being what the customer needs, for example, red and yellow psychologically induce hunger and happiness. They use these marketing techniques to build a relationship between you and their product[EW1] [BS2] . It’s not just McDonald’s that do this as well every fast food company do this and review customers response, these companies are here to make money and as long as they keep making an income they don’t care how its effecting the customers (11Fds Peter Beswick, 2016). American children from the age of 2-11 watch more than a thousand fast food television ads a year. In 2012 a ridiculous 4.6 billion was spent on fast food advertisements alone. These are all the reasons that are causing America to be the fattest nation all these reasons contribute towards America obesity crisis, because with the results these companies are having there is no wonder why America is their number one client.

Secondly is it alright to believe that Americans being fat is all because it’s not alright is alright as long as you feel good and comfortable? [EW3] [BS4] The body positive movement is to change people’s thoughts and ideas about body size, if a question was asked saying “what size is the opposite of overweight” I think many people would reply saying “normal” (What Is the Body Positive Movement?, 2016) and that is what body positive movement is trying to do, to change your idea of “normal is skinny.” The negatives outweigh the positives in this argument considering people are dying just to feel comfortable in their own bodies. this argument is reasonable until you are reminded that being obese is a considered a medical condition, when you are obese you have higher chances of gaining health complications such as, high blood pressure, high cholesterol, type two diabetes and many more, you also have higher chances of having a stroke, getting heart disease and even cancer. It is wrong that teenagers are bullied for their body weight, no one has the right to be abused by anyone about your body shape, I also agree that you should be allowed to look how you want to, whether that being the clothes you wear or the shape of your body, what I am not alright with is people dying before they needed to. Yes, the argument is all well and good, until your life is on the line.


In conclusion fast food companies are a big part of the problem but will not be a part of the solution, they are in it to make money and they know this method works so why would big corporate companies sacrifice their business and money for the 33% of Americans that are obese mainly due to their products. USA is taking a stand against the obesity problem by adding a fat tax which is when the customer has to pay a percentage of the unhealthy product directly to the government. This fat tax is a brilliant idea to stop excessive spending on unhealthy foods considering the companies will not change American families need to turn off the television and show their children healthy ways to eat for future generations. Americans all over need to change their dietary and exercise habits to ensure a happier and healthier life.

References:
11Fds Peter Beswick, 2016
National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey, 2010
What Is the Body Positive Movement? December 25, 2015 by Marie Southard Ospina


 [EW1]Good examples here
But you need to integrate them into your writing. Not just list them.

TEXAS
 [BS2]Howdly doodly
 [EW3]Is this your topic sentence?
Are you going to discuss the body positive message throughout this paragraph? Was this idea sign posted in your introduction?
Are you using TEXAS Paragraph structure?
 [BS4]hi

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